My 1st poem...

Time for reflection...

This year's Chinese New Year is probably the WORST CNY celebration i had in my life... Not just because we had less holiday that i normally want, but also because i lost one of the most precious thing in my life...

MY PHONE!

My 8 month old Nokia 6300(or 6301 depend on the location) being stole in the "nin cho sham" of the CNY. Bu**S***#$%@*$@#$@#@!!!! Everything is inside the phone! The memory we had, the contact numbers, and i just bought a 1GB memory card that day,
WuuUUuuu... (T.T)

That few days i mourn over the lost of it until i came about to write a poem to express how i feel, and that's how i start my life writing poems... ^^

My 1st poem... Here it goes...


My Beloved

phone, phone, phone,
Why thee... he stole.
i need thee more than any woman,
as thee worth more than a pot of gold.

the time when i live with thee,
through sickness, through bath and on the field.
kicking the ball across the field,
always have thee in my view.

Thy present makes me strong,
as i knew thee will always have my back.
going through the days when I'm sad,
thee'll be...
cheering me by playing a song.

Wind blows, earth shakes, my face dims.
Tears shows, smile fakes, sadly it seems.
breath of earth form the light,
give me strength and show me might.
i shall stand up, from the incident,
and be a better person without that pendant.


Well? What you all think? Feel free to write comment on it, any comment...
So i can improve... Thank you...
Ohya! One of my friend J said the poem i wrote sound more like writing to a girl then to a phone. He can't tahan of cause but well, that's suppose to be how it sounds. That's why i entitle it to be "My Beloved"